Monday, February 27, 2006

An ACSian Will Die Today (Pt III)





















Bumper issue - Nineteen pages! This is the last instalment of "An ACSian Will Die Today". Dialogue in this series written by throughglassdarkly. - Hou

An ACSian Will Die Today (Pt II) << | Christmas Special, Continued < | > How Project Work Came About

112 Comments:

Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

first!
first to say that this sucks!!!
bring back the good comical shit!

Mon Feb 27, 02:14:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

second, to second that!
bring back the good comical shit!
this stuff sucks!!!
and there are more parts?!?!?!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooo

Mon Feb 27, 02:15:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

third! and this shit could go on forever... so... i'll just occupy top 3!

pls pls pls bring back the good stuff.... =)

Mon Feb 27, 02:16:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

haha i like that you had some of the real funorama stalls in your final panel =)

Mon Feb 27, 07:38:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

wow.. new comic on a monday morning.. dun understand the comic, no humour.. can some one explain it in english..

Mon Feb 27, 10:08:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

The humour here is very subtle. This is really just the Evil SCGS girl joke in the first issue carried to the extreme.

The focus is about recreating the schools of Singapore as warring gangs in an imaginary 1950s America.

So

HCI---the Chinese triads

River Valley---the Chinatown bookies/money launderers

RI---Cops

SJI---The Irish Catholic Mob

SCGS---Evil manipulative femmes fatales

St Nicks---Stoolpigeons and information traders (gossip queens)

NJC---Nazi Jaguar Corps. Note the initials.

The Funorama---A casino in Atlantic City, note the initials of "Atlantic City".

Mon Feb 27, 10:16:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

now it is me or does the chinese triad boss look a tad like chow yun fatt?

nice work on the storyline though somr of the abbreviations could be better done. we need more of such 'side-stories' to keep this site interesting. alternating between the normal satires and these would be a nice touch.

well done.

Mon Feb 27, 10:56:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger edmund said...

You got it, the joke is that everyone in the strip has a movie star, past or present as a visual model...

Xavier----Burt Lancaster
Cedric----Robert Stack
Giselle----Emmy Rossum
The ACSian----Richard Widmark
Triad Boss----Chow Yun Fatt
General Alwin----Paul Scofield
Sam----Kirsten Dunst
Chef Mou----Ge You

A plot summary will be up later for those who can't follow it...

Mon Feb 27, 11:19:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger cinewhore said...

It feels rushed, like you guys are trying to just wrap everything up quickly so you don't have to do another instalment.

Mon Feb 27, 12:11:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger Mousuke said...

Yeaps, feels kinda rushed.. and put altogether its a little confusing as well.

Mon Feb 27, 02:44:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

mbdnfmpCan you guys put up some kind of explanation for ALL 3 of the comic strips? I seriously dont get a single word out of it...

Mon Feb 27, 03:41:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger Freak Father said...

Interesting.

SCGS girl was damned evil.

But we lost 14-10 in rugby B div to SJI!

AAAArgh!

Mon Feb 27, 04:05:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

hci chinese drama as the gangster boss... creative. But since he is from HCI, shouldn't he say everything in Mandarin?

Mon Feb 27, 04:10:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger edmund said...

Anonymous, I was thinking of that, but realized that to have a really cool Chinese gangster boss, he would have to speak great English too. A bilingual and super cultured man who also works his plans from behind the scenes. After all, Wallenquist from "Sin City" is "The Kraut" (German) but he speaks English too.

Anyway, here is the plotline for those who STILL can't get it. This is told in chronologically linear form, but the strip is not chronologically linear and uses flashbacks.

Another reader has explained the relationship between the schools and gangs already, so look it up.

Xavier is a member of the St Joe Boys, an Irish Catholic gang. A few years ago he took a job as a plumber when he was destitute and fell in love with Giselle, the evil girl who sings at the Yin Yang Club, who seduced him. Her boyfriend though was the ACSian, a smuggler who up till now, has made his trade mostly in cocaine. However, bad girl Giselle is also the daughter of Colonel Graham, a late bigshot involved in some kind of matters of national security and intelligence, and she has helped to get out her father's secret: a list of covert agents, so that her boyfriend can sell it to numerous clients including the Chinese triads, Nazis etc. for a fortune. Xavier does not know this and wants to save her after she makes up lies to him about being mistreated. So he gets carte blanche from his Boss to exact his revenge, upsetting the balance of power between gangs.

Using information from a stoolie(women who sell information within the underworld). He crashes a deal that the ACSian is about to make with the Chinese triads, which startles the Chinese triad boss who realizes that his brothers (the victims) were trying to cut a deal with someone he considered unsavory. (After all, he can sell anything, just not cocaine.) The Chinese triad boss has also had eyes on Giselle for a while and decides to use this chance to get her. With the police in his pocket, he uses the ongoing investigations as a means to interfere.

Det. Cedric Griffin, a rogue cop that has no problem hanging out with crooks because he is a high school pal of Xavier's, has been on the case of the ACSian for a while and has caught on that he might be selling something else other than cocaine, which is national secrets. Therefore he gladly gets Xavier to join him on a raid to where he has heard the ACSian would start a deal next: with some ex-Nazis seeking to build the Fourth Reich.

However, after a smooth start where the Nazis are rounded up and resistance put down, Cedric and Xavier realize they have been double-crossed. The Commissioner, who is in the pocket of the Chinese triad boss, turns on them, paving the way for the Chinese triad boss to get Giselle, who has by now killed her boyfriend in a quarrel.

The Chinese triad boss and Giselle go to Atlantic City for a nice weekend in the Funorama Hotel...and there he wonders if she really loves him, or if he is really her next victim...

And that's the storyline.

Cheers.

Mon Feb 27, 04:44:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

could u show the pics of the actors/actresses u base u characters on?

Mon Feb 27, 04:52:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger edmund said...

Anonymous, give me your email address and I will send you a post featuring photos of the actors and actresses as attachments.

My address is throughglassdarkly@hotmail.com

Cheers.

Mon Feb 27, 05:03:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

Not blatantly amusing. You really have to read everything. Which I didn't, because my eyes hurt from reading all that text. But the references to all those schools(even JCs!) amused me quite a bit. Especially the evil SCGS girl with her steadily sexier getups.

Mon Feb 27, 06:03:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

i realli dunno wad u wanted to convey to the ppl lookin at ur drawings. i dun understand it.

well i think its time to move on to another new topic. :)

Mon Feb 27, 06:54:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

looks like sketchpad has sort of come full circle. what with the new and more flattering presentation (so i'm biased ;P) of the SCGS manipulative stereotype.

now that the series is over.. (and i must say that it was a breath of fresh air and a brave attempt at different styles), what do you guys intend to do next?

Mon Feb 27, 07:10:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

did i mention that i enjoyed the series? :D

keep it up guys!

Mon Feb 27, 07:12:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger coffee said...

Seriously well done. One of the better web comics I have read in awhile. I especially liked how you guys blended an American style of comic writing and presentation with Singaporean school sterotypes. Bravo. I must agree that the humor here is very subtle, in fact, its so subtle that most people cant pick it up. And that wasnt meant as an insult, to anyone. BTW, do you guys take art or something? Your anatomy are pretty top of the line stuff...

Again, well done.

Mon Feb 27, 07:28:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

I liked it. Maybe not so the evil SCGS girl, (ahem.) but rather than typical ha-ha humour, your tried something different. Maybe a little confusing at times, but I think its good work.

I agree, the art is good, do you take art classes?

Mon Feb 27, 08:15:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

but then the cops sure win one... cos ri = cops what and ri will bring back the waterpolo gold this year

Mon Feb 27, 08:25:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

SEE TOW stop using jian yings name!

we know we surely gonna win one X)

the comic abit cheem la. but scgs girls all so evil ar? hmm ;)

Mon Feb 27, 08:30:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger En and Hou said...

its rushed because i have my terms-En

Mon Feb 27, 08:44:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger whirl said...

this blog is getting dumb and dumber... perhaps its better if you stop drawing, and leave the blog scene in grace while you still can.

Mon Feb 27, 09:02:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

ur work used to be better and more funny. it's getting more and more boring now. please write more comics like those before!!

Mon Feb 27, 09:17:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

YAYNESS FOR THE END OF A LAME SERIES.

Please bring back the nice comics like the good ol' times.

You don't want to see your blog going down.

Maybe that comic will be good for those people who can analyse sources damned well. For me, no.

Bring back the oldies. (I didn't bother to read this. At all)

Mon Feb 27, 09:47:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger woonie said...

oh my in the end the character either dies, gets betrayed, betray others or have fun in bed.

nice drawings, nice storyline, considering that there's a long wait between part 2 and 3, it's a job really well done.

keep it up e&h! x)

Mon Feb 27, 10:18:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

yay i loved this series! the fact that the humour is subtle makes it great! ;) but i agree that it's a little rush, slightly disconnected. u should continue with this kinda style!!

Mon Feb 27, 10:21:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

Coffee,

Most of the frames are taken from old movie photos and current movie star photoshoots, heh heh. Obviously this was created by reworking the stills into the proper context of the story. But still, it is a great effort!

Tue Feb 28, 12:25:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

throughglassdarkly shld just mind his own business at student's notebook. this whole episode is total bull.

Tue Feb 28, 12:37:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger lee zhixin said...

I thought it was deeper than the rest of the comics. (: Although...

HAIZ NO RGS.

Ohwells, I suppose you can't expect everything. :D I like the artwork though! But the ending seems a bit - abrubt.

Tue Feb 28, 12:49:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger Moody said...

I don't understand it, but from the looks of it it has to be something good. The art makes up for everything else though.

Tue Feb 28, 01:07:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger Kinfoong said...

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Tue Feb 28, 04:21:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger Kinfoong said...

I enjoyed the series, especially the references and fantastic artwork. Its a pity that many readers of this blog might not be able to appreciate the unobvious, possibly because of its different style and apparently rushed storyline. I couldn't get half of the story till ThroughGlassDarkly explained it, besides the obvious references and stereotype portrayal. Perhaps for future instalments that brink on the "multiple cheem references" style like this one, a summary on the story with glossary for reference would be good.

Also, whats with the NJC being nazis? just because they're NATIONAListic? Don't quite see the stereotypical link here.

And i'd like that post of actors and actresses too. =)

Tue Feb 28, 04:22:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger joe said...

I'm going be a bitch.it feels like you guys are like going 'Oh thats cool lets put it in!' without proper thought to how it fits as a story.

The graphics are fine if a little lacking in informing detail in certain places. Your problems lie with the story telling.

1) Narrative structure: Think about your symbols, what they are saying and how it fits together.

Besides the artwork, the snap changes in viewpoint from issue to issue (and even within the issues) make for a very disjointed narrative.

2)Less is more: too many words and links leading nowhere. Keep it tight, its a webcomic not a novel.

3)A jokes not funny if you have to explain it. (in this case you sometimes become the joke.)

You guys have taken the task of both expanding youselves visually and content-wise. Seriously,well done. The challenge is not leaving your readers behind. Its not going to be overnight so All the best!

Oh stay awake in Lit, esp E1, its amazing what you can learn if you think visually. :)

Tue Feb 28, 09:45:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

Niiiiice....

Like the style.

HCI/Triads win in the end! Whoopie!

Though seriously, the Nazi bit destroyed a lot of the atmosphere... Godwin's Law anyone? When something like this comically involves the Nazis, it becomes NOT funny.

Tue Feb 28, 11:49:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

im a gay and i love yinz (yinrong the gay whos brother got kicked out at campus superstar hehehehe n00b)
hey this comic sucks la bring back the ones about the evil scgs girl and the burning bra rgs girl

Tue Feb 28, 03:33:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

Jianying, why you are asking for an evil SCGS girl joke when this comic IS an evil SCGS girl joke, only told with a different style? ;)

Tue Feb 28, 05:46:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger En and Hou said...

mib : There was no arguement in the first place, so no loss. =P

The Rest : Did I mention that this whole series is experimental? From time to time, we use this webcomic to test out new concepts, but in the process we can't please everyone.

Cheers,
Hou.

Tue Feb 28, 06:44:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

this entry lack of a certain 'punch'. and i am terribly disappointed by it.

i believe you guys are capable of someting better, and i'll b looking forward to better entries

Tue Feb 28, 10:16:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger zyun said...

is it just me or was that mzx. lol

Tue Feb 28, 10:17:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

yes this one is crap.

Tue Feb 28, 11:08:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger edmund said...

zyun...

Yeah, that was mzx, you an RG girl too? I am very sorry I couldn't include RG girls due to constraints of the strip...originally there was supposed to be an RG girl modelled on Keira Knightley, to be named "Melioria Aevi" :), and she was supposed to be an ultra-feminist hoodlum who gives the ACSian a black eye.

Tue Feb 28, 11:13:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

heyy, i think these comics are just a little too sophisicated(eeps forgive the spelling) for we people!

can we have to old, simple yet funny comics back? preety preety please with a cherry on top? with a little sugar if u like it? *puppy dog eyes*

Tue Feb 28, 11:34:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

oi seetos stupid gay sia

boo

i go ask zhiboobs to tekan u. WATCH OUT SIA. X)

seetow so horny, want to see bra-less girls ;)

Tue Feb 28, 11:39:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger Ivan said...

It's appalling how some people just cannot appreciate different styles of comics. Not all comics have to be funny.

I liked the subtlety and the different contexts in which the different schools fought, but the story-telling could have been a bit clearer. Still, I suppose some people just want to be spoonfed. :p

Wed Mar 01, 10:30:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

i prefer your previous style of writing...this 1's not so appealing

Wed Mar 01, 11:34:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

ACJC owns at polo and they have hotter guys too

RJ is like ... ewww

Wed Mar 01, 04:00:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice visuals, slightly fragmented storyline though.

Wed Mar 01, 06:31:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger -nik- said...

erx... is it juz me
or doesnt anyone find it abit offensive to say that e stnix gal is a ... erm... 'ENTERTAINER' (her old job)

nics of e world unite!

Wed Mar 01, 08:52:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

i love the originality, but the themes are nothing new.

Wed Mar 01, 08:58:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

hi its me kohjianying back again!
i think yinz's brother "didnt do very well" in campus supserstar so he got kicked out. jacked.
and yinrong is so horny that he any girl fat fat he also want to see.
maybe guy he also want. see la never come training go see guys...

Wed Mar 01, 09:38:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

i duno i cant bloody understand this whole comic..
haha i love shallow humour and this underlying implicit whatever humour is killing me and i dont understand anything... bring back the braless of yesteryears!
anyway how did people do for As today?

Wed Mar 01, 09:40:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

this is good!

it's cleverly entertaining.. for those who wanted 'throw-it-at-your-face' entertaintment, u won't find it here...

Thu Mar 02, 05:15:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

hahaha. im so amused by the funOrama hotel. add in the dunking booth and bouncy castles pls. haha. this is superbly original guys.. great job!

why not do something about the jOnes from different sec schs in acjc? go beyond the barker boy+sc girl stories. i believe sc is facing competition even from schs like ijtp. haha bimbos!

well i just heard someone say that girls from girls' sch, despite their looks whatever, will definitely hook up a guy from a boys' sch when they are in acjc...

and its kinda true. see the stmargs n nygh girls with sji boys?

Thu Mar 02, 06:53:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

not oni in acjc.. even in JJ u wil see stmargs, nygh, mgs gals sticking to boys from barker, sji, n hci... maybe this is their sch's students "fatal attraction" to the opp sex n oso the sch uniform?!

Thu Mar 02, 07:18:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

don't like this entry. so cheem. i liked the previous ones better.

Thu Mar 02, 08:29:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think thats the problem with many of us. Oh hahaha, RGS gurl burn bra ahahaha. Look nerd guy and evil gurrrlz. Hahahaha. Thats all we know. Comics aren't all meant to be brainless humour. Yes, you might actually HAVE to think! The comic had some problems, but its a great effort if you ask me.

To the writers, I hope you don't get discouraged to try new things.

Thu Mar 02, 10:00:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger lee zhixin said...

Who, me? 0.o

Er I think you might have gotten the wrong person cos I seriously don't think I know you. haha. (:

Fri Mar 03, 12:51:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

well regarding the girls sticking to boys from certain schools, that's quite sad right. limiting their own choices. LOL x)

Fri Mar 03, 07:05:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger Shelley said...

i nearly LAUGHED MYSELF OUT OF MY CHAIR when i saw that last panel. hope it was a successful venture. (the school really really does not need any more moolah but what the hell, those were good times.) if i wasn't studying overseas i'd have gone back just to walk around and reminisce ;P

and people who are kaobeh-ing about the change in tone, it's intellectual humour. chill. even though i enjoy the film noir spoof, i do think the simple stuff was more enjoyable to a wider audience. and you can tell them you thought so too, but for goodness sake don't tell the cartoonists what to do or demand. it's their strip, they can do what they damn well like with it. sheesh.

suffice to say the moral of the story is don't screw with the girls in blue. ((whatever it takes to reach the top, better watch out, 'cause we're not gonna stop. so there. *shameless pride* ...i embarass myself, i know.))

Fri Mar 03, 12:28:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

it's really not the author's fault that some people are just too dumb to appreciate different flavours of graphic novelization...

Fri Mar 03, 12:34:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

ah, i love the funorama part. hilarious!

Fri Mar 03, 04:37:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

hmm..but the mou person is in hci now.

Fri Mar 03, 08:48:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger edmund said...

Anonymous,

This is why I have him "acquiring" the Huangcheng in a property deal...he has got HCI, now let him handle it...he he he...

Fri Mar 03, 09:16:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

the braless rgs girl still owns.
i dont care.

Fri Mar 03, 10:33:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

boo i am kai yu ahaha

see tos is gay! horny basket

Sat Mar 04, 02:18:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

something the bad things i must say
didnt get one bit of the acsian must die shit
and i'm a bloody acsian

Sat Mar 04, 02:20:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

oh so sad.
i bet you must regret not studying for psle.. then not beinga ble to get into ri.
dont deny it. you wanted to go ri but in the end couldnt and went acsi.
kaiyu is gay

Sat Mar 04, 03:43:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

why must the acsian die?!?!?

Sat Mar 04, 04:16:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

NANYANG GIRLS WANT TO DO A PROJECT ON STUDENTSSKETCHPAD! OMGWTFLOSERS

Sat Mar 04, 06:17:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

Boring...needs more interesting ideas...
haha nvr try putting primary schools in ur comics...
ADD MORE ACS I
(y the fun o rama no UNMASKED haunted house...my bro stall leh)

Sat Mar 04, 06:40:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

im sure primary school...
put what little kids running around tryin to hack each other down with light sabres in acs?
lol that only happens in lousy schools la not like good primary schools like nanyang

Sat Mar 04, 08:04:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger Mou said...

hi Mou here. nice story you've got there...although i needed to read it twice to get the story, i must say it flows quite well... with a certain dream-like quality to the entire atmosphere. Yes, and i do actually look like that caricature in real life.

Sat Mar 04, 08:38:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger edmund said...

Dear Random,

The ACSian must Die because he is an Average Cocaine Smuggler...and he killed three men and a priest.

Anyway, this is a film noir. In a film noir people will either get betrayed or die. It wouldn't be a film noir otherwise.

Cheers.

Sat Mar 04, 09:16:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

omg when i read throughglassdarkly's long and squashed summary of the whole story, I almost fainted.

dude, like I don't think you can squeeze like everything inside three comic strips. It's too rushed and confusing! Good idea for a novel, though. Will be looking out for it soon in bookstores to come. (Illustrators En &Hou I suppose?) :P

But thanks for writing eveyrthing and trying to include all the schools inside your complicated and deep story line (though some schools seemed a bit forced and rushed to be included)

However, on the whole, great job guys and thanks for the entertainment!

Sat Mar 04, 09:41:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

Loved it.
So sinisterly funny! And I honestly couldn't stop laughing at the last panel... Go ACJC~! Kinda rushed at the end, but no matter. Great job you guys!

Mon Mar 06, 08:45:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger Freak Father said...

Wow. What a spectrum of feelings.
Great job on the 'mafia days' setting, guys.

There's great authencity and atmosphere.

However, I think I still prefer your older artworks.

Once in a while liddat OK lah!

Tue Mar 07, 06:29:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

ACJC rox haaz the last part about the funorama stalls was good and btw continue with your experimentation it wasn that bad

Wed Mar 08, 07:27:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger JO* said...

this sucks. so long and boring. get sth better...

Sun Mar 12, 01:35:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

THIS SUCKS. I DONT EVEN UNDERSTAND OR RATHER BOTHER TO READ IT. THE FIRST FEW SCRIPTS ARE STILL THE BEST. IM A SC GIRL AND STOP INSULTING SC MIND YOU! IT ROCKS K. WE SC GIRLS DONT JUST SPEND THE WHOLE DAY THINKING ABOUT BOYS AND MONEY. WADEVA. SC GIRLS GROW UP TO BE SUCCESSFUL WOMEN! YOU ARE JUST AN ASS.

Sun Mar 12, 06:23:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

good stuff.
took me a while, but i caught on. :)

personally i feel it was a nice job. haha.

Sun Mar 12, 09:21:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

and the picture with giselle blue in her gorgeous threads lazily carrying the still-steaming gun really worked for me! hahaha.

but urh, as loyalty to the school i feel it is my duty to tell you that sc girls are all nice and carry no guns! ha ha.

Sun Mar 12, 09:22:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

ARGH...SCGS GIRLS AGAIN...always that few schools...c'mon man. We are getting bored of them!

DO SOMETHING......!

Thu Mar 16, 01:27:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

no more sc girls please.. BRING BACK THE IJ!

Thu Mar 16, 02:22:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

Whee great work! I think i managed to get most of it, but the thing that really got me is your art style. :D Love the way you stuck the schools inside.. how come HCI no girls? >=/

Thu Mar 16, 03:24:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger the virgin undergrad said...

though the plot is kinda convoluted, but really, the artwork is FANTASTIC. It would probably be cool if u could just do a strip with simalar artwork but a less complicated plot.

Sun Mar 19, 03:42:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

it's awesome! and i really love the scgs girl's outfit there. damn, if only our sc uniform was really like that in real life.

but how come the lost series scgs girl looks totally fat and abit ew. but the LA.SC thingy was so awesome.


-SCGS LADY ;)

Sat Mar 25, 02:31:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Blogger Weiman said...

Hey this comic's cool, especially for a first time attempt at incorportating the American style into a parody of a Singapore story. Don't get discouraged by the flamers, k? ^_^

I do agree with L-inc tho, about how you need improvement in the flow and panelling of the story. The story is innovative and refreshing but you have to keep in mind the flow storytelling through the medium of a comic. School's calling, mebe i'll add more comments once exam's over. ^_^

Good luck! keep up the experimenting! ^_^

Mon Apr 03, 10:01:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

i prefer the old style...more comical.its getting a little over-dramatic dont u think.anyway the HWI logo on the dudes shirt was a really nice touch and i was laughing like crazy when i saw it.perhaps an inclusion for neighbour school fairfield is in the cards?

Wed Apr 05, 07:22:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

Great! Like an adaptation from novels. Just tt it needs to be clearer for beginners. Cheerios :)

Thu Apr 06, 01:35:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

SIN CITY LOVE!

Thu Apr 27, 09:14:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

A great moive.. LOL..

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Sat Aug 05, 09:37:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think that blue dress was totally awesome.Unfortunately,if SC had such a uniform,we'd be sued for indecent exposure.I mean...seriously...but I like the dress!Btw,the comic was really well drawn.It seemed like those kind of real comics you can find in the NLB or something.

Fri Oct 06, 05:57:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

ARE YOU ALL JEALOUS ALL WHAT?
CAN'T GET IN THE TO SCHOOL AND JUST MAKE FUN OF THEM.

YOU ALL SO WULIAO!
PUT MORE TIME TO YOUR STUDY LAH.
DRAW THOSE IDIOT STOOPID COMIC--"

ONLY LAME PEOPLE WILL APPRECIATE IT

Tue Oct 10, 10:34:00 AM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

i feel that you shouldnt play around with words or anything. i can hurt ties between schools. oh ad btw, i feel that the comics drawn are rather ugly and untidy. pls give better work quality. and its really causing people's eyes to bleed. you dont want that t happen right ? so please. improve.ahh, pls dont insult too. cos i dont think your insults funny or interesting. OLD.

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Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

LOL. Wow, I absolutely LOVE. IT. And your art is simply brilliant; I don't understand how people can say it looks "rushed" or messy! I think the sketchy feel gives it a casual edge that I personally really like! And the story is imaginative and funny. And AHAHAHA BONUS POINTS for the last panel, which is simply the funniest thing I've ever seen xD Thank you ever so much for breaking out of your typical style to send us this. The shadows and the different perspectives you used are really, truly... I AM BLOWN AWAY. All right, I will stop um ranting on now. THIS WAS AWESOME. HONESTLY.

(AND all the best for your As. ^ ^ I took a break from studying for mine to read these because it looked so impressive :D)

Sun Nov 05, 06:22:00 PM GMT+8  
Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

i think this comic series was good - but perhaps it was too great a deviation from your usual stuff and too dependent on the storylines from the sin city comics though.

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Comrade Anonymous Anonymous said...

OMG you guys just love sc (:

and you know, the sc girl is like way cool<3 you guys draw really well. but we're really nice and sunshiney :D

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